All Comments on 'Teaching Eden Ch. 02: The Coach'

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Djmac1031Djmac10317 months ago

I didn't have to "nurture" your "inner exhibitionist" very much; you took to it quite naturally. 😉

Your usual mix of fun and sexy with a bit of heart and reality thrown in to keep it grounded.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

EmilyMillerEmilyMiller7 months agoAuthor

@Djmac1031 - thanks as always, hun 😊

Novella23Novella237 months ago

Loved it, especially the ending where we got to see the exhibitionist Eden who got off on Luke watching her. That was incredibly erotic, IMO. The lesbian sex was beautiful. Emily, you can write! Beautiful! 5 stars!!

Victoria14xsVictoria14xs7 months ago

Well, I’m on board! And I shall try to remain patient.

EmilyMillerEmilyMiller7 months agoAuthor

@novella23 - thanks, hun 😊. Em

EmilyMillerEmilyMiller7 months agoAuthor

@Victoria14xs - I hope you enjoy the ride 😊. Em

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Oh bugger! That's torn it. Now life isn't so rosy in the (lady)garden of Eden. It could be a zero game for Sums after she gets caught Lukeing at a Johnson. Tune in for next week's episode. I sure as hell will be.

EStaccatoEStaccato7 months ago

I appreciate the hallmarks of a true story and not just leading us from fuck to fuck. Eden has as incompatible flaw which… we don’t want her to fix! The tension is delicious. Great concept, sexy progression.

EmilyMillerEmilyMiller7 months agoAuthor

@Anon - that’s so funny. Thank you 😊. Em

EmilyMillerEmilyMiller7 months agoAuthor

@EStaccato - thank you, hun. Glad you like it 😊.

Em

StrappingManStrappingMan7 months ago

Facebook Status Update: It's complicated.

Jeez. Talk about buggering it up as I'm sure the coach would say. What will Eden do with her next door and many potential voyeurs to tickle her fancy?

EmilyMillerEmilyMiller7 months agoAuthor

@StrapingMan - tune in for the next episode 😊. Em

AchtungNightAchtungNight6 months ago

Good job on the hot sex and emotional interaction. I also appreciate the realistic perspective of Michelle. Hope Eden eventually finds happiness too.

EmilyMillerEmilyMiller6 months agoAuthor

@AchtungNight - thanks, hun 😊 Em

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