by EmilyMiller
I didn't have to "nurture" your "inner exhibitionist" very much; you took to it quite naturally. 😉
Your usual mix of fun and sexy with a bit of heart and reality thrown in to keep it grounded.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Loved it, especially the ending where we got to see the exhibitionist Eden who got off on Luke watching her. That was incredibly erotic, IMO. The lesbian sex was beautiful. Emily, you can write! Beautiful! 5 stars!!
Oh bugger! That's torn it. Now life isn't so rosy in the (lady)garden of Eden. It could be a zero game for Sums after she gets caught Lukeing at a Johnson. Tune in for next week's episode. I sure as hell will be.
I appreciate the hallmarks of a true story and not just leading us from fuck to fuck. Eden has as incompatible flaw which… we don’t want her to fix! The tension is delicious. Great concept, sexy progression.
Facebook Status Update: It's complicated.
Jeez. Talk about buggering it up as I'm sure the coach would say. What will Eden do with her next door and many potential voyeurs to tickle her fancy?
Good job on the hot sex and emotional interaction. I also appreciate the realistic perspective of Michelle. Hope Eden eventually finds happiness too.