All Comments on 'Teased'

Interesting premise.

But all too straightforward. Too mechanical.

Needed much more in the way of preliminaries. Foreplay. Needed descriptions of exactly what he was doing to her. And how she looked. And how she felt.

Needed to know what her breasts looked like. What her nipples looked like.

Needed some reminiscing about things he had done to her in the past. Perhaps even theit first time together. And how she reacted. And how she protested. And how big her orgasm finally was.

Needed descrptions of her pussy. Shaved? Manicured? Hairy?

Needed many more details about the blow job -- all the way from the "tongue only" beginning to his ultimate orgasm.

Three stars.

I liked your story a lot. Some stories don’t need to filled with too much description so our imaginations can fill in the blanks.