All Comments on 'Teasing Our Imagination Pt. 02'

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Was quite funny and mildly interesting until she “cheats” about coming on her tits. The story went from a 4* to a 1* within the blink of an eye. Typical lying woman.

If you go back on your word or cheat on outcomes it simply means he won’t return.

While I liked the story, and the “game,” I do not like her cheating at the end. Bdsm is about trust, and if she cheats where is the trust? Writing was good, I could picture myself in the moment, but that little issue makesgive a 3