All Comments on 'Ted and I'

I gave this 4 stars because it is your first submission, and that takes some guts. I'm hoping there will be further chapters to this story to explain why Chris is no longer alive...

Thanks!!!

I'm looking forwards to reading more - especially after your teaser "if she was alive today". Thank you for posting this.

Not worth commenting on.

Just get divorced. Why the hell stay married to someone you hate?

Today must be first time loser stories day. Not oner has been worth reading.

So her husband finds out and kills her cheating ass. Hopefully Ted is telling the story from the wheelchair he's been confined to since the husband beat him down severely, breaking his spine and irreversibly paralyzing him for life. Please, someone write that story!!

Is Chris not alive because her husband had a bigger pair than she gave him credit for?

I couldn't improve on lakeeriegoatguy's comment. You've broken the ice, now looking forward to you finishing making a story out of this scenario. Also 4 stars for first effort. Good luck! cd

A good first effort. However, there was an anachronism. The word gay as in reference to homosexuality wasn't that common in the Britain of the 1950s.

An unfaithful slut, now deceased, hooks up with a manwhore. Wow...that's a fascinating idea for a story. <yawn>

Correction. “If she WERE alive today”.

If she were alive today? Hopefully that means her husband found the cheating bitch out and put a harsh end to her betrayal.

Coming to this story after reading Klampets story on naturism was a real downer. This was bad, no redeeming qualities at all. A woman in a stable relationship throws it all away because she wanted better sex. No consequences, no aftermath, no epilogue, no whatever.

"exposing my fuckhole to him." - What woman talks like that?