All Comments on 'Telekinesis Ch. 08'

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Anonymousabout 1 year ago

Great writing. Imaginative, easy to read, involving. Bravo!

SirKevin about 1 year ago

Most superhero stories on this site end up being abusive, but this one isn't. Integrity is so sexy. All that, and it's well written? *Chef kiss*

rubyroundup 6 months ago

I wish chapter 8 was not a repeat, otherwise great story.

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