All Comments on 'Telekinesis Ch. 08'

by VallesMarineris

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rubyroundup 7 months ago

I wish chapter 8 was not a repeat, otherwise great story.

SirKevin about 1 year ago

Most superhero stories on this site end up being abusive, but this one isn't. Integrity is so sexy. All that, and it's well written? *Chef kiss*

Anonymousabout 1 year ago

Great writing. Imaginative, easy to read, involving. Bravo!

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New short story submitted. New novella (sci-fi mind-control) will soon be submitted for the Geek Pride challenge (going live May 25th). Watch this space. Thanks for the positive ratings of my previous works. More stories on the way. Your comments and critiques are important....

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