All Comments on 'Temptation for Tina Pt. 06'

I'm sorry your story is not rating higher. If you're interested in reaching a wider audience and seeing more readers enjoy your efforts, you might consider giving each segment a chance to gestate more fully and give a couple of proofreads before publishing. That would also give you an opportunity to reduce the reiterations of various facts and descriptive terms. Good luck.

This series is so great. I would love to be a Daddy to such a younger girl.