by jthunderbolt
This could have been great, but the writer descended into depravity that is not logically something that Manny and Sharon would do or expect to continue.
It's a good story. I'm kind of identifying with Audrey and her husband, don't know what that says about me LOL. I think I would like to see Reshmi and Raj win, not only would it probably be the easiest for Audrey and hubby, but it would be the sexiest to read - the others might be a bit extreme and go places that wouldn't be fun to read about.
I like Rhonda's idea too. The first two parts of the story are okay, but it really heats up in this installment. Keep it up.
Graham needs to win these two so they can be broken down and taken to the next level of slavery.
I could see things getting very interesting with her desire to humiliate him, and the threat of incest.