All Comments on 'That Night Pt. 01'

How is this a loving wife? More like a cuck whoreing out his slut.

Hot is there more

Well technically the wife in this story didn't "Cuck" the husband the husband did it himself and most importantly got to fuck the wife afterwards. Of course eating another man's cum out of a freshly fucked cunt isn't for everyone, but certain men do like eating cum. So if this couple carry on this way, no disrespect and no humiliating the husband then get to it. Of course sharing a wife's cunt is also a certain man's thing. But if he knows exactly what he is letting himself in for then again go for it. Giving away a wife's cunt is not for everyone.

It is always good to see a new writer enter the fold. Welcome aboard. You showed considerable skill in depicting a 3some sex capade in agonizing detail. But where is the story? We have NO info about who the other guy was, or if the wife had ever had him or any other person in a 3some. Not trying to be an arm chair critic, just saying that a story needs to tell more than the sexual details of a matchup. Keep 'em coming.

A cuck story as your first submission. What a waste of time and effort. If this garbage gets a rating of 2 I'll be surprised.

Give it some more thought.

The first two sentences said it all. One Star.

ROFL another Gold Star Nakedcraving student. If you cant get mister "Im not gay but I love chowing down on other dudes cums" Odoreater to suck your little wee wee, you really arent very good.

Rest assured what little praise he gave you is as valuable as herpes.

Side serve of shite, more like rofl

Ignore the negative comments. This is a good first story. There is some room for improvement, but overall great job.

good start. Could have fleshed out the characters a little better before cutting to the chase. You will get better at story telling, realizing that the build up is as important as the sex.

I will give you a 4 because of that. And, ignore the troll haters. They exist only for that reason, to spew hate.

"Dinner is served my love" she says.

One of the sexiest sentences in the English language for creampie lovers like me to hear from my hotwife.

Rye

ryeandgingerayle2@yahoo.ca

I love cream pies.

I'm lucky enough to be in a cuckold marriage by my own doing which includes her horny big cocked boss. I enjoy regular feedings when she gets home.