All Comments on 'That Tricky Genie Pt. 02'

With all the X rated parts removed, this would be a fun, multi part TV show to watch !

Of course there would need to be several more chapters. ( Which I hope we will see here on Lit before too long ). Part way through chapter 2, I had to go back to Ch.01 as I could not remember the start of the story line which i had read several weeks ago. Even as much as i enjoyed reading this story I could not overlook the few grammatical errors. I hope the author will either find a good editor as well as a "slow" proofreader or take the time to handle those task by themself.

Thanx to the author for not ruining this writing with outrageously, ridiculous attempts to dramatize simple sexual acts.

Thumbs Up !

I really liked part one and two, and, as the/a previous commet said, th fact you did not try to overly dramitisise (is that a word) the sex is a good idea. I hope to see a part three sometime soon!

Thoroughly enjoy stories like this and can't wait to see where it goes.