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The past tense of lie is lay not laid.

As some of the other commenters have noted, there are a few typos, but frankly, this is fantastic content, especially for a new author (at least here). I'm glad I didn't discover this until there were a few chapters out, because it's moving slowly, but as the Dad points out repeatedly in the previous story.... Slow is better. Thanks, and well done! Also, if you need/want a proofreader, feel free to send me a PM.