All Comments on 'The Ad Agent'

by Mr56543434

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Lots more crap from you. Wake up try a new line or too.

Buster2UBuster2Ualmost 2 years ago

10 stars for a Short but Sweet Story that gave me wood. LOL The ending completely caught me off guard! I love a happy ending! More Please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Vile human being

Racerman1969gsRacerman1969gsalmost 2 years ago

What a STUPID piece of writing BS!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

If these women are anything like the one in your avatar photo, these husbands are better off to have them fucking other men, instead of making them want to puke their guts out in the marital bed.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

The story line is on par with the atrocious grammar and editimg.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

wife is awful, husband is worse. No marriage here, no love, just stupidity.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

what a dumb story - he is more like her pimp

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

A bad idea from the start to the end

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

lose not loose

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Offerings from this writer just get worse with every new story... -- 1☆

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

So your wife is a black cock slut now, is that what your saying?

lc69hunterlc69hunteralmost 2 years ago

Not well crafted, and plays into the white wife who loses her mind and her brain for black cock myth.

JustplainjeffJustplainjeffalmost 2 years ago

You STILL need an editor! Also, your many stories still suck bilge water.

Rocky62Rocky62almost 2 years ago

Nope, she’s correct, she is a whore cause she did it for business gain

rodryder44rodryder44almost 2 years ago

Dori is the quintessential 'Hot Wife'.and David is a pimp. How else to describe his pushing her to have sex with her coworker and a client. I do want to read more.

NitpicNitpicalmost 2 years ago
Yet

Yet more crap.Is there no one out there who can write a decent story?.

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I am a chuck writer so move on if you don't like chuck stories. Keep your shit to yourself.