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All Comments on 'The Anniversery Gift'

by binder38us

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migmigabout 20 years ago
Exciting?.

Can rape stories be exciting?.

Yes they can.This story isn't.It's rubbish.

bdsmbillbdsmbillabout 20 years ago
Not too good.

Sorry, but I didn't find this erotic at all. Don't give up. It takes time and practice to learn to write well.

oscuro_fuerzaoscuro_fuerzaabout 14 years ago
An okay idea... a start... but get an editor!

I realize English is probably Your Second Language, but stop With The Random capitalization of Words. I couldn't finish Reading your short Story because these Were So Annoying.

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