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All Comments on 'The Anniversery Gift'

by binder38us

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oscuro_fuerzaoscuro_fuerzaabout 14 years ago
An okay idea... a start... but get an editor!

I realize English is probably Your Second Language, but stop With The Random capitalization of Words. I couldn't finish Reading your short Story because these Were So Annoying.

bdsmbillbdsmbillabout 20 years ago
Not too good.

Sorry, but I didn't find this erotic at all. Don't give up. It takes time and practice to learn to write well.

migmigabout 20 years ago
Exciting?.

Can rape stories be exciting?.

Yes they can.This story isn't.It's rubbish.

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