All Comments on 'The Apex of Submission'

O.K. CLEVER WRITER, I am not at all into incest. I know this guy is not their real DADDY, but this whole premise was uncomfortable for me before and continues to be. The girls are just too childlike. So, not for me. Having said that, your writing is getting better. Just liked your earlier stories better. Just my opinion. Take it with a grain of salt ! Still, it is you, so, 5 STARS.

I’m obsessed with this story and find the connection and philosophy between the women really sexy and expansive. The vibrator orgasm took me out of it; I wish He would have made them cum with his mouth and hands. Regardless this is an incredibly sexy character dynamic and I’ve come 3 times from this story; love your work!

Is "Daddy" still going to be happy after babies come and he is not the center of the women's world?

Instead of focusing on pleasing him 24/7 there are children to take care of, feed, housework......