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All Comments on 'The Arrival'

by DSMass

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Good story, holds promise, but you need and editor to get the highest ratings

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Please reread your story and fix the spelling mistakes before posting. This would have been good if I could have understood it!

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