by QueenBeeWrites
The first chapter started out okay. There was the beginning of a story and it seemed he had found someone taking him away from a hideous future. Why you decided to repeat chapter 2 as chapter 3 I can’t understand. Chapters 4 and 5 made me think I’d missed important things along the way as in chapters being missing. You must have some idea of where this is all going but I don’t. Best thing I can say is it was an interesting beginning whether she was going to be a caring domme or a sadistic one.
Agiel, Thanks for pointing this out! I did not realize I have posted the same chapter twice. I'm going to fix this as quick as possible.