All Comments on 'The Babysitter Pt. 11'

I think that one short sentence from the second page, "It was warm and easy and felt like home.", best describes this very moving chapter. Reading this had me tearing up more than once. While this is a new beginning for Ash, Stefan and Luca together as a family, part 11 also read as though you were wrapping up their story. I'm hoping that that's not the case, but whether or not it's The End, I'd like to thank you for sharing this beautiful love story that has always surpassed *****s with each new addition.

I loved this!!! Will Adrian have his own happy ending! I love Ash and Luca together, so sweet!

What a wonderfull ending. I loved every single bit of this story. I'm gratefull that this piece of art was able to found me

Hi! Thanks again for your kind words and comments. Thanks for sticking with me until the end! When I started writing this, I didn't really know where I was going with it, but I'm happy how it turned out and happy that y'all are too! 😊

As far as Adrian's story, I did purposefully leave his ending open, but at the moment, I don't have anything for him planned or in mind. For now, I'm gonna go work on my novel, and when I inevitably need a break from it, I may revisit Adrian and the Santoro-Averys. Thanks! 💜 - J

A heart-warming and romantic story really well constructed and plotted.

The characterisation and dialogue is great and I thoroughly enjoyed the whole series.

Thank you for creating and sharing.

I'm so glad you did a final chapter! I loved it!!

Loved it and I envisioned too Ash’s wedding suit, I’d love that fabric. Your writing was descriptive and I was there for all of it. Great job