All Comments on 'The Ballad of Emily Jeffers Ch. 12'

Getting far to fetched and way too many characters. Thought the lead character was wanting to get them out of this work. He seems to be far too eager to continue riding them hard and fast with plenty of people getting freebies. How many men are in this town?

When is it going to finish?

I wish someone I knew when I was eighteen would have where’d me!