All Comments on 'The Barbeque'

Many, many word errors!

So many errors!

short and sweet

They need to swap on a regular basis.

it takes brain damage to be into swapping when you already have a great wife. That's proven by the stunning number of mistakes in such a short tale of woe. This 'author' can't even spell vixen properly in the handle.

So, you bash my name, not knowing what names are available on here, or thinking that I maybe using the same name as I have on other sights because vixen is already taken. Vixen is a female fox or a sexually attractive female. Also, the main character is a straight female, but you suggest I already have a great wife. However, you claim the 'author" is the one with brain damage. This story is one hundred percent made up. Also, I didn't check my spelling, because I trusted spell check on my computer. There are many people on here, with spelling errors. I don't bash them for it. I just enjoy where their story takes me.

Not a bad story, needs editing.