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I may or may not continue writing in this world. I get the feeling that maybe this kind of negative eroticism isn't quite wholly welcomed on literotica, and that's fine. I get why most would be turned off by it. I may pivot to healthy, positive depictions of sexuality with a more mainstream fantasy world next.
But if I do continue on with this darker world, it would be a longer story that takes place after The Baroness and the Orc. Emily's story is over, so she wouldn't be a POV. There would be two new main POVs with their own separate stories that eventually meet up. Ashra the orc from this story would be one of them, and the Countess of Brightmont would be another. It would be similarly bleak, depressing, and unhealthy, so I'm not sure if I'll dive in or not.
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Anonymous6 months agoYou really should have put more effort into either portraying the situation with the demons as absolutely dire, making orcs the only option for survival, or made the orcs more benevolent. As it is, the heroine comes off as a suicidal fool who actively and objectively made the lives of herself and everyone around her worse for no good reason. I know that suffering is the point with how masochistic the story is, but you still have to logically justify it.
Anonymousabout 1 year agoGod damn that was a fun read! Do write more, it's great to read something with such a mix. Loved every chapter.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoStory is pretty fucked but there’s a place for that too. I enjoyed it and hope writing it was a good experience
