All Comments on 'The Bitch Gets What She Wants'

by kevinlaroche

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flynndflynndover 3 years ago

Wtf? This ended so quickly. The only sex scene was super short and rushed, almost ad rushed as the end. This story seemed less like an erotic story and more of an ad for abusive relationships.

It would have been much better to not add the time skip part and write more about him coming to reluctantly accept his situation if that's the fetish you want to write about.

kevinlarochekevinlarocheover 3 years agoAuthor
The main focus of this isn’t sex

It’s the manipulation which the girl uses to mold the boy and finally force her way into his pants and his heart.

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