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Shybunny93Shybunny93over 1 year agoAuthor

The story continues.

Coryphaus666Coryphaus666over 1 year ago

I love the idea and the characters seem interesting but I think you could benefit from an editor to review and proofread

Shybunny93Shybunny93over 1 year agoAuthor

Thank you so much. :) also I did have an editor help Mr on the second part. But if there are still issues thats all my fault. I get impatient with my self and don't have alot of time to go over the story's very often. So I just look at it and think, meh good enough. Lol.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Loving the stories. Keep it up!

Shybunny93Shybunny9311 months agoAuthor

Striktdaddy3717 iam sorry i don't understand.

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Iam just an curious individual, that has very particular kinks. ;p My discord- Shybunny93 - lets chat ;) If there is anything you won't me to write or have suggestions just let me know. I like sharing ideas! :) I have more stuff on hentia foundry if your interested! ;)