All Comments on 'The Book Lover Ch. 11'

This is an unusual and adventurous story! Thank you for it, and for the perspective you've selected for the narrative voice.

A quick note - in this chapter 11, on the first page, in her first visit to Hamid in the throne room, you have this sentence: "On his head sat a simple throne made of an indistinguishable metal." I suspect you meant "crown"?

Yes, of course it was meant to be a crown and not a throne. If Literotica’s editing process with published works wasn’t so cumbersome, I’d just fix it.

I’ll probably try to fix that at some point, but it’s a pain.

I’m glad you’re enjoying the story.

I did get the mental image of a crown shaped like a small throne on Hamid's head. My first thought was "Hmmm, I'd like to pursue that idea further!"