All Comments on 'The Boys'

Apart from the illiteracy of starting a sentence with a meaningless "So", telling the story as if you are talking to some woman only excludes most of your audience. The majority of people who are going to read it are men - who, you may have noticed, don't have pussies or boobs. They can't relate to it.

Also, you seem to have no idea what a sentence is. Or logic.

Add to that the annoying use of second person, which never works.

ignore the trolls if all they can do is pick on peoples english it must be because it is all they are good at ..myself im a little dyslexic and cant spell for shit but do the best i can when the trolls laugh at my spelling i must wonder if they laugh at people in wheel chairs too we all do the best we can with our handycaps ...