All Comments on 'The Branson Family Pt. 04'

Another fantastic chapter, Missy. Contact me through my author page. We need to discuss Adele. I’m glad you have resumed writing. Chat soon.

In addition, i still have the scene you asked me to help you write for this series involving Darius and Lindsey’s son if you don’t. It’s pretty hot.

A lot of material from the previous chapters with only minimal fresh material. More please. Lets advance this story.

I agree with the other earlier comments; not much original content. Along with some poor structured sentences. But the submission scenes and Lindsey being dominated were very good. Having the "SOUTHERN BELLE" marked in some places is very unique and later will serve as more submission and humiliation for you Missy.

joemmm

The story is good but there is a lack of reaction from the other side.

ex if Denise was dominated by Steve and he turned the tide in front of the football team. and she starts to fall in love with Steven

Or maybe Darius was her half brother because he had raped her mother. There are several hypotheses.

The story is good but there is a lack of reaction from the other side.

ex if Denise was dominated by Steve and he turned the tide in front of the football team. and she starts to fall in love with Steven

Or maybe Darius was her half brother because he had raped her mother. There are several hypotheses.