All Comments on 'The Brown Mare Pt. 03'

Love the story and the slow buildup, but hate the short chapters. As soon as im getting into the story it ends and i have to wait for the next installment, but thats the price to pay for a good story. Only other gripe i have is rosa making such a stupid mistake. I know its a story and all, but in her line of work that kind of mistake could/would get you killed. Hopefully pt4 is right around the corner. Keep up the good work

Greetings fans,

I am really happy people are liking this story. I am currently working on the fourth installment but it will take some time. As you can tell from some of my earlier works, grammar is my weakness. I am trying to spend more time editing as well as working on some other stories. I don't want to loose the charm this story seems to have by just pumping out dribble with no direction. Also its difficult to make it longer without losing detail, so I try to leave it on a good cliff hanger. On a side note, if people have ideas for where this thing is heading please leave a comment. Maybe it will inspire me.

Will the next chapter be soon

Hey,

Is this story coming back?