All Comments on 'The Bunghole Mystery Ch. 02'

Good fun but could be more detailed. It reads like a summary. Lightness and humour are always good though!

These stories are written in the genre style of Nancy Drew, Hardy Boys, etc. What you're probably picking up on is this. It's sized (and hopefully written) for easy reading. There's a lot of story to get through in 40,000 words.

Thanks for all your hard work. I'm puzzled that you don't have more followers. You've got one more as of today, anyway.