All Comments on 'The Champion's Companion Ch. 06'

The plot is missing. The story about immortals with super powers looking for exotic sex is extremely arousing, but I cannot see their motives.

I appreciate your comments whether you loved it, or hated it. I will think more on the beginning, middle, and end of my next story.

I painted myself into a corner with this one, and frankly things I wanted to happen haven't.

Perhaps I'll return to it. Thank you again for sharing this with me.

It seems that hermaphrodites is a bit of a theme here, so I'm sorry, but ciao!

I liked this chapter except for the part with the ogress. It was kinda cruel the way they treated it. It was going well but then you kinda sullied it at the end, not one of your better chapters.

Please this stuff is tame compaired to what has happened over the past

100,000 years.

If this was made into a movie it would be 1 of the greatest movies ever.