All Comments on 'The Charity Trap'

by PamelaLightener

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cmj711cmj711about 1 year ago

It's better to give than receive & then he learns how to feel.

Wonderful story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Lovely execution to a new twist on the idea. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I gave it 4 stars mainly because it was written really well. I loved each character. Just didn't care for the plot. sorry I know you are really proud of it and you should be it just wasn't my cup of tea. I believe Lucious Leftovers and Landlady, caretaker, lover was better. I can't wait to read another one of your stories. Thanks for sharing.

Pappasleaze

PamelaLightenerPamelaLightenerabout 1 year agoAuthor

Anonymous: Thanks for your sincere and not unkind feedback. :)

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

leahal58leahal5811 months ago

Loved this story. I did not expect the outcome. Please would you write more chapters of this story

MICHAELG1963MICHAELG19639 months ago

One of the best stories I’ve read on this site. Outstanding characters and incredible ending

lexdw32lexdw32about 1 month ago

A very compelling and unexpected story. His unique fetish was something I had never thought of. Please keep writing.

Lexi

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Newbie author, with a few other stories published over the years. A fan of A Governess for Richard series. Added April 17, 2023: Almost all the fiction I have ever written is published here. I am grateful for the positive ratings, and am trying to improve. This is fun. One no...