All Comments on 'The Collaring of Chloe Ch. 29'

Wow, well that was something of a surprise not entirely unexpected but still, wow. I’d say she definitely needs to talk to Dr Clock. That’s a very insightful chapter.

Thanks for sharing

Tess (uk)

What a great chapter! I was really drawn in by both the conversation with Dr Clock and that end twist ^_^

A wonderful job as always, keep up the great work!

5/5 stars

I'm very glad you liked it, Tess. I've been building to this point for a while now and I was very worried that I wouldn't be able to properly form it. She will indeed be talking with Dr. Clock in later chapter. I'm also glad that it seems a lot of people of already liked this chapter, despite it not being either particularly sexy or exciting. It helps to show me just how much the story as a whole has been enjoyed by people. :)

Thank you JP, I am glad you likes it. I've wanted to bring Grandfather Clock back in for a long time, so I'm glad I was able to. There was a lot more about him that I wanted to reveal, but couldn't quite make it not seem forced. However, since this won't be the last time you see him, it just gives me more for later. :)

Love this chapter and I am so happy that this series is returning!! This is one of my favorites here on lit. Can't wait to see more and learn what Chloe chooses!

Glad you are enjoying it. I plan to continue this book to it's completion, don't you worry. :) I sometimes switch to put out a couple chapters of the other novel I write on here, but I don't plan to stop putting out chapters of this book until it's done.

And then after that I plan to begin a second novel that will be more focused on Mittens' perspective. ;)

I am very glad you are enjoying the story. Hope you continue to enjoy it as it goes along. :)

I think this chapter or maybe the previous one should have included more about how Vic differs from James. What made her a better "slave owner" than James. The story seems a little light on that.

It's been a great read though.

5/5

J

I can see your point as far as maybe better punching up some of the differences and will put some thought into that. That said, do note that they are actually not meant to be all that different in a lot of ways. What is more important here is that Victoria is better at portraying the hard-line 'owner' that Chloe has daydreamed about and is much more prone to pushing Chloe's boundaries.

James is more of a care-giver type, not as interesting in pushing his submissive's boundaries as helping them explore themselves. (Though he has a bad habit of enjoying pushing society's boundaries....)

Neither is actually meant to be 'the better owner'. Vic is just more in tune with what Chloe was originally expecting and daydreaming of, but is still very caring. James is very different from what she had expected, but his compassion and supportive nature has deeply charmed her. It's a question of 'want' versus 'need'. A balanced scale, making for a hard choice.

Otherwise, it is still a good suggestion and I may put some thought into better illustrating more of her style, as it is in opposition with James's, in the definitive edition.

Wonderful chapter! Great to see that Chloe now has to fully think and wrestle hard with what she truly wants.

When I was first preparing to write this whole arc of story, I worried a lot that people would say that there was no real conflict here and 'of course she'll pick Master'. I wanted to really make sure that it was something that wasn't so clear of a course. One of the ways I tried to achieve it was by making it clear that her choice wasn't about which one she never sees again, but something more subtle.

As one person put it, it is a choice of what is more important to her: love or dreams.