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All Comments on 'The Crash and The Contract Ch. 09'

by cutegeekguy

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

This needs a serous re-read to put right the stupid mistakes that spoil the reader's enjoyment.

One example is just one sentence: "Steve uncuffed her wrists, and told her to follow her into the house as he walked on ahead of him."

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