All Comments on 'The Cruelest Master'

by jalaurie

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
My kid is getting braces tomorrow.....

.......if this can happen at an orthodontist office! I enjoyed this so much!! The story is light, funny, sexy and hot!!! I had a soaked seat of sorts after reading this. I have enjoyed your stories very much jalaurie, anxiously awaiting more from you.

UnicornPrincessUnicornPrincessover 8 years ago
ok...?

Um, no offence, but how can someone make someone else cum just by typing a few sentences? Just asking.

jalauriejalaurieover 8 years agoAuthor
Thank you, Unicorn Princess

No offence taken.

It's a talent, honed by years of practice... ;)

All kidding aside, while I have shortened the time frame, the story is basically true.

Thanks for reading!

MarkGreeneMarkGreeneover 8 years ago
Very descriptive

Your writing is very descriptive. I could actually envision the whole scenario in my mind. Actually for a moment I thought the horny dad was going to turn out to be the Master. Wouldn't that have been something!

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