by Shybunny93
Yea sorry about the spelling and grammar. I am not a good proofread. Lol
However thanks for checking the story out. :)
And I appreciate the honest criticism.
Every paragraph has a typo, maybe two or three each one. Seems to be no proofreading at all. Like how the story uses a horse but is still hard to read….
Thank you so much for the kind words! :) I am so happy yall enjoyed the story. I love seeing so many people who share the same taste as me! Also, anyone who likes this stuff should chek out (Femboysub29) first story. It's some really good stuff!
Love this story. Seems like a really good start to an interesting relationship. I love the way Beast doesn't even have to try it order to get the Princes submission. You really know how to make a great setting. Really interested and flustered by this story. Can't wait for more.
Thanks for the feed back! (Mortl) thank you for liking my story so far. And don't worry, there is many more changes down the road I have planned for both Nick and Beast. ;D
And as for the other comment. Thank you so much for loving my previous story! I do plane on continuing it. It's just hard to find the drive to write sometimes. Especially since I do it for free. So it might be a while till I add more to it. :p
Glad you are back . loved you previous short series (which i hope you would continue) and i am currently looking forward to this one
Some grammatical errors. Like the setting though. Maybe morph Beasts head a bit more so that he can articulate himself.
Some grammatical errors. Like the setting though. Maybe morph Beasts head a bit more so he can articulate himself