All Comments on 'The Darkest of Fates Ch. 01'

Some grammatical errors. Like the setting though. Maybe morph Beasts head a bit more so he can articulate himself

Some grammatical errors. Like the setting though. Maybe morph Beasts head a bit more so that he can articulate himself.

Glad you are back . loved you previous short series (which i hope you would continue) and i am currently looking forward to this one

Thanks for the feed back! (Mortl) thank you for liking my story so far. And don't worry, there is many more changes down the road I have planned for both Nick and Beast. ;D

And as for the other comment. Thank you so much for loving my previous story! I do plane on continuing it. It's just hard to find the drive to write sometimes. Especially since I do it for free. So it might be a while till I add more to it. :p

Would love for Beast to be able to talk about his lust for Nick.

Love this story. Seems like a really good start to an interesting relationship. I love the way Beast doesn't even have to try it order to get the Princes submission. You really know how to make a great setting. Really interested and flustered by this story. Can't wait for more.

Thank you so much for the kind words! :) I am so happy yall enjoyed the story. I love seeing so many people who share the same taste as me! Also, anyone who likes this stuff should chek out (Femboysub29) first story. It's some really good stuff!

Fantastic! Really enjoying these. Keep it up!

Thank you so much!! Iam happy you like my stories!

Every paragraph has a typo, maybe two or three each one. Seems to be no proofreading at all. Like how the story uses a horse but is still hard to read….

Yea sorry about the spelling and grammar. I am not a good proofread. Lol

However thanks for checking the story out. :)

And I appreciate the honest criticism.