All Comments on 'The DeVilles Ch. 07'

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chris_brownchris_brownover 16 years ago
great job

i couldnt get past the 2nd page without cumming hard,excellent work on this chapter,u should be very proud of yourself,i just wonder how u plan on topping this should u choose to ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

Wow! Easily the best serie I ever read!

I wish this would never ends!

And I wish I could live in Blanton!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Awesome Story

I have totally enjoyed this story. I hope that MonikerSmith is getting lots of good feedback because I know that others like it just as much as I do. Keep writing please MonikerSmith. We really appreciate it! The DeVilles rule!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Hot transformations!

Wow! This was a great story. Loved how the author described how the people so willingly embraced sin and pleasure. Wish I had a hot little demoness of my own! Thanks Moniker Smith

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
I'm in love with Dinah!

Loved those seductive little demoness temptresses. Dinah was my favorite! Please say that we will see more of them and the rest of the growing demon family! Thank you for this awesomely erotic story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
delicious

Oh. My. The Devil(le)s have taken over! I wish they would come over to my hometown. Things good be ever so much more interesting there. Thanks Moniker Smith! Rock on!

Raziel83Raziel83over 14 years ago
Evil, seductive and oh so hot!

This story just keeps getting better and I can't wait to read more stories from MonikerSmith.

I really liked how this episode was connected to the previous ones and we saw the return of Billy and Chrissy's friends.

the_sinnerthe_sinnerover 14 years ago
A masterpiece

A brilliant job of taking a dirt-simple plot (demon fucks human, human becomes demon, repeat) and turning it into an enthralling story loaded with tons of over-the-top superheated sex.

mBrowmBrowabout 13 years ago
Marvelous heat

As I wrote in the Lit Forum (Story Feedback) six years, ago, MonikerSmith's The DeVilles is a Hot, decadent series!

Great read, quite arousing, very well done.

Chapter 7 was posted in Nov-2007. Can we expect more, MonikerSmith? You once referred to the chance that we'd "hit Chapter 8", so I still hope for more chapters!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Boring.

Too much sex, not enough plot, and no character development or suspense. The demons are all-powerful, nobody resists, nobody has a chance; there is no hero to even attempt to rescue the town. It is just sex, sex, sex with little or no plot, which soon becomes tedious.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Best ever

This is BY FAR the best series I've ever read on Literotica. And I've been reading here for a very long time. Now every woman I see is a sexy demon as described by the author. Which leads me to this question, does anyone know what happened to Monikersmith? It's like he just vanished after writing this series.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Great stuff

Should make this into a real book.

Would sell by the truckloads.

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