All Comments on 'The Doll'

Damm why did it have to end

Please continue. Was rolling along so well, was expecting a few more pages.

Well, too bad the author says this is the end. It would have been great to have Wendy's virginity taken by Patrick since that was the last thing the two had not done. Instead that bastard Charles takes it even though Wendy loves it. Would have been nice to see what the rest of the party was like. Just how far does Patrick take Wendy and just what happens at the end of the seven days? Oh, and what happens with Sally during her 180 days. A separate set of stories would be to introduce those sex shop dolls and their adventures.

Got me hot

Too bad it's only one chapter

Love the story. I hope you finish her journey and take us where you want it to go. Can't wait to see how her journey goes

where do i find the stories that inspired ur work; the one that u named in the intro?

Btw great work here!

The page is https://collaredslutgirls.bdsmlr.com, there are some 66 stories both of a dystopian world in which female slavery was restored, as well as other stories set in an ancient period and others in a world based on the stories of John Carter by Edgar Rice Burroughs.

All these stories are compiled but in Spanish translated by me in the following link https://todorelatos.com/control_relatos/, along with other stories of my own.