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Anonymousabout 2 years ago

Such a massive improvement from your first story! A very sexy story, presenting it as a dream sequence is a good idea. Obviously an actual Dom wouldn’t just leave you hanging there after a scene. Btw, this one got 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing, Tess (uk)

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Long time reader, but only recently decided to make a profile. I love to both read and write and I am currently working on my own fantasy novel. Lately when I have gotten stuck, I've been switching to attempting to write my own erotic stories to get my creative juices flowing....

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