Try the free LITEROTICA WEBCAMS!

All Comments on 'The Dream that Ended with Three'

by WBCO6250

Sort by:
Newest FirstOldest First
  • 2 Comments
DaddyWarBucksDaddyWarBucksover 3 years ago

Liked it. Would have loved it if when the threeway action started, if it was in the first Person as told by Holly. It was her dream and sexual desire.

WBCO6250WBCO6250over 3 years agoAuthor

@DaddyWarBucks That's a good idea. Shift the scene to first-person. Thanks for the feedback. Maybe the next story...

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Login
Post as:
Anonymous
Login
userWBCO6250@WBCO6250
10 Works
44 Followers
A happily married man who enjoys writing erotic stories. Not a professional writer by any means, but learning as I go to try and make a better story. While my current stories involve threesomes, I am working on expanding my writings toward other fantasies. Hopefully you all w...