All Comments on 'The Eclipse Pt. 01'

But not exactly BDSM, no consent...unless you put it in the wrong category? It was sexy, initially I’d thought I clicked on a CNC story but that must be on a different tab. Not sure why a female grifter is automatically a slut or is that a trait of all grifters??

Depending on where you take this depends on whether or not I read on but your writing style is good. I’m sure you’ll find plenty of takers.

Thanks for sharing and best of luck with your writing.

Tess (uk)

Thanks Tess,

All grifters might be sluts, might not be.

Yes I think next time I'll put more effort into which category a story should go into. It's not a BDSM relationship story like 50 shades and is more CNC.

I had about an hour to write this, I felt I left a lot out. Mia doesn't have much depth. Buck is a thug a la "hot damn", lol.

S_n_C