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very monotone. No passion. Its like you are reading a newspaper article or from a dictionary. No descriptions. A writer shows whats going on, painting a picture with words. You are sumply telling us what is going on. Id honestly recomment a Creative writing course will Make a huge difference for you. Good concept and ideas. All your characters are stick figures. Its like having sex with someone who just lays there and never makes a sound.