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It was evening and Esmeralda decided just to drive to the nearest liquor store and drink her sorrows away. She went heavy on a bottle of Malibu and fell flat on her face in the parking lot. She woke up in a hospital where she got stitches on her nose. She must have bumped her nose on a sharp corner. Thank goodness it was only her nose and not a punctured eyeball. The doctor referred her to therapy for this depression.
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Anonymous12 months agovery monotone. No passion. Its like you are reading a newspaper article or from a dictionary. No descriptions. A writer shows whats going on, painting a picture with words. You are sumply telling us what is going on. Id honestly recomment a Creative writing course will Make a huge difference for you. Good concept and ideas. All your characters are stick figures. Its like having sex with someone who just lays there and never makes a sound.
