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All Comments on 'The Family Slut Ch. 01'

by vegitto306

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Xzy89c1Xzy89c12 months ago

Little too cum focused... went for some tropes. 1 dropped out to be a model. 2 former college qb

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

complete harem story first bro why would you keep making new stories !

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

everytime I see your name in new stories I just hope it's the harem one!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

This is so erotic, but too much emphasis on cum. Otherwise very hot story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Ugh.

cb1982cb198222 days ago

I keep checking back for a part 2... please let us know how this progresses

vegitto306vegitto30622 days agoAuthor

It should be done in a week. I am not happy with the current draft so rewriting it again.

BlackPlanetBlackPlanet8 days ago

Very erotic story but the dialogue got a little repetitive, plus the interacts between the sad and Luke were weird. Still a very good story.

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Returning author. Used to write on other forums years ago and starting to write again. 1st May - Next Chapter on Indian Harem is uploaded and should be out out once approved by mods

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