All Comments on 'The Family Slut Ch. 01'

The daughter needs more sexual enjoyment and satisfaction Not jist daddy and bro endlessly cumming

Please bro find an editor and someone who does proof reading for you because it's full of mistakes and weirdly steuctured sentences.

Very erotic story but the dialogue got a little repetitive, plus the interacts between the sad and Luke were weird. Still a very good story.

It should be done in a week. I am not happy with the current draft so rewriting it again.

I keep checking back for a part 2... please let us know how this progresses

Ugh.

This is so erotic, but too much emphasis on cum. Otherwise very hot story

everytime I see your name in new stories I just hope it's the harem one!

complete harem story first bro why would you keep making new stories !

Little too cum focused... went for some tropes. 1 dropped out to be a model. 2 former college qb