All Comments on 'The First Meeting'

Very good first submission. I enjoy erotic stories written from the female perspective. I encourage you to keep writing and submitting.

only thing wrong was it was written in the past tense. z

You are not afraid of using erotic words- would have been really hot if written in the here and now

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You made it sound like a real experience, and I think real experiences are very sexy. I would have enjoyed knowing a little more background about the characters, though, and reading a more detailed physical description of them. All in all, nicely done.