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by magentathecolor

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goodshoes2goodshoes25 months ago

Great for a first story. Ahhh--the joy of youth and newness. Hope you write many more. Thanks.

ChrisWarnerChrisWarner5 months ago

Welcome. I love a story about games. This is a promising first story. I won't burden you with advice other than to suggest some of the paragraphs were too long and could have been broken up more.

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