All Comments on 'The Gentle Master'

by only2servemymaster

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Great story. I want to see more. I sent you a dm.

only2servemymasteronly2servemymasterabout 2 years agoAuthor

Anonymous- I'm new to this and don't know how to check my messages. I'll keep trying to figure it out though!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Mate that was a good story and I think you are giving too much emotions into the start and not enough backstory for reader to enjoy.

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