All Comments on 'The Gift'

by jlowe4704

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
the trash just keeps on coming in this category

1* nothing more needs to be said

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
You earned

Your absolute single star within 3 lines and it never got better. Best advice for you is forget how to upload.

PolyLvrPolyLvrabout 5 years ago
Erotic and exciting.

Forget the haters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Kind of juvenile and stupid, don't you think?

Hmmm, guess you already demonstrated the answer to that question.

oldbearswitcholdbearswitchabout 5 years ago
JLowe, it was OK for a first timer. The peeps were kind of harsh on you, there was pretty good sex and no lies or disrespect or mule dicks. Also you didnt waste words on a big long intro.

Maybe just 2 or 3 quick teasing incidents between hubby and wife to show they are in lust with each other, and raise the tension before the 3way?

The prearranged couple was a good twist, at least a little different than the usual.

Thanks for the story.

Xamphos2018Xamphos2018about 5 years ago
4 star.

You got it right Loving Wives, not cheating wives or fucked up couples, congratulations on a good read.

IFAFILHGIFAFILHGover 3 years ago
HOT FUN EROTIC STORY

Enjoyed reading this story... didn't want it to end

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