All Comments on 'The Good Deed'

good deeds sometimes generate good responses. Loved it

Well done, I liked it

Good story. Keep going. Is the wife cheating on him?

Distinguishing between your and you're would have increased my enjoyment. Also, "he head" probably should be "the head". With those suggestions in mind, please tell me about Gina and Harry. Did he keep his promise? Is his wife still going home to her parents?

Good start, but you stopped just s it was getting good. Also curious to see what the wife was up to

Nice guys always get the best prize!!

Definitely needs a Part 2.

The guy needs to talk to his in laws, find out what's going on with his wife.

Also return the favor to Gina.

Definitely enough talent here to applaude the return of a valued author!

It is difficult to enclose a story with literary elements and erotica in the short story form.

This works, I think, because the plot is close enought to the thoughts that float around in the head of the reader that you can skip some of the extra details. It takes talent to know what to say and what to leave for the imagination. Thanks