All Comments on 'The Horse Pt. 01'

This isn’t non con, it’s just rape and you have no idea what you’re writing.

If she works out for 2 hours each day, watches her calories, then there is no way she will be fat. She won’t have 32DDD breasts. Boobs are 100% fat and are the first things to go.

My advice to you is to keep it realistic. We’re not expecting Hemingway; but we also don’t want to be treated like retards. Don’t insult us.

A bit short, but an entertaining start!

Learn to use tags. It's so simple, a grade school student could do it...

@Whackdoodle I just wrote about my size and perception is everything, I was not fat but having a short body with large butt and tits can make one appear fat and yes I had all of those comments said to me. And maybe 1970's food that was tv dinners that were thought to be healthy really were not. She was watching The Rockford Files after all.. its a real show. look it up. This is the first chapter as well so give it room to grow.

Well, will there be more chapters or are you going to leave us hanging? Good, but short, start.